Help with my english!!!?

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Hello everyone. i m an italian student in mechanic engineering and i ve to do my english examination...i will give you my english text i ve to give to my professor...can you give me any suggestion and grammatical correction??? Please help me...thanks

The modern robot industry is addressing itself to develop the vision technology for robot cells in order to increase productivity and open new processes to automation. According to a lot of researches and experts’ opinions, the vision technology will award to robots higher reliability decreasing cost and increasing ease of use.
Vision system isn’t new in automotive robotics but, because of its great reliability and low costs, it is gaining greater penetration and there are a lot of possible quality enhancements.
In Rick Youngblood and Roberta Nelson Shea’ s ideas, two important character in different automation industries, vision system can be employed in the field of chassis assembling and safety driving.
More robots are vision-ready, which allows users to simply plug in a camera.
Adil Shafi, president of Shafi, explains that there are only two requirements for a robot to work with vision and to see things randomly in space: we need to be able to talk to the vision sensor, either through a PC or directly to the sensor, and secondly, we need to be able to see that the robot updates its location when it’s given some feedback by vision.
Therefore these robots become good to adapt their application to different environments. This is the first pace to a massive adoption, final purpose of an industry which is improving this technology toward cheaper and much more precise and reliable robots. Moreover every industry will give users software of developing and controlling making easier use and giving the user a fundamental autonomy.
There are some difference between how vision was before and how vision is developing. Some years ago it use correlation-based pattern matching which relied on light levels, and that was very, sensitive to changes in lighting and appearance. Now algorithms have been improved to find the 3D position and orientation of parts, there are higher levels of integration that are emerging between robots and vision.
Vision system can revolutionize especially the welding phase in every vehicle building sector. “They are starting to look towards better weld quality and tracking of welds, logging the quality of the spot-welding and being able to track that to particular vehicles”, Michael DeWitte, sales director for Kuka Robotics, says.
The maturation of vision system technology is opening new avenues for industrial robots. In the future we can expect greater integration between robots and vision to combat the darkening economic landscape.

Answer 1

Try this. Malbene, I took a few chances when it wasn't totally clear to me what you wanted to say. If you have any questions just edit your question. I will see them.



The modern robot industry is now embracing the development of vision technology for robot cells in order to increase productivity and open new processes to automation. According to research results and expert opinions, vision technology will provide robots with higher reliability, decreased cost and greater ease and range of application.



Vision systems are not new in automotive robotics but, because of the great reliability and low costs they offer, they are gaining penetration and introducing many possible quality enhancements.



According to Rick Youngblood and Roberta Nelson Shea, who are prominent in different automation industries, vision systems can now be employed in the fields of chassis assembly and driving safety.

More robots are now being supplied "vision-ready", which allows users to simply plug in a camera.

Adil Shafi, president of Shafi, explains that there are only two requirements for a robot to work with vision and to see things randomly in space: we need to be able to talk to the vision sensor, either through a PC or directly to the sensor and we need to be able to ensure that the robot updates its location when it receives vision feedback.

Such robots will have the capability to adapt their application to different environments. This is the first step toward a massive adoption of robot technology and is the final objective of an industry which is developing its technology toward cheaper and much more precise and reliable robots.



Moreover every industry will give users development and control software, facilitating application and giving the user a fundamental autonomy.



Robotic vision is changing its direction. Some years ago it used correlation-based pattern matching which relied on light levels and that was very sensitive to changes in lighting and appearance. Now algorithms have been improved to enable the 3D positioning and orientation of parts so that higher levels of integration are emerging between robots and vision.



Vision systems are ready to revolutionize the welding phase in every vehicle building sector. As Michael DeWitte, sales director for Kuka Robotics, says: “We can look forward to better weld quality and tracking of welds, logging the quality of spot-welding and being able to trace that to particular vehicles”.



The emergence of vision system technology is opening new avenues for industrial robots. The recovery from today's downtrodden economy will certainly be supported by the emerging integration between robots and vision.



Chaio.

Answer 2

>> to develop the vision technology for robot cells in



It is a bit clumsy to use "the vision technology". Ordinarily this phrase would omit "the".



>> two important character in different automation industries, vision system



"Character" is plural, so use "characters". The same is true of "system".



>> There are some difference between how vision was before and how vision is developing



"Are" is plural, so use "differences".



>> Some years ago it use correlation-based



Use the past tense phrase "used" here.



>> Vision system can revolutionize especially



A bit clumsy. Try "Vision system can especially revolutionize " instead.



Hope this helps.



Ciao!

Answer 3

You may want to change "a lot of" to many, because a lot of is often not considered okay in formal writing. Also, maybe make it "According to many researchers and experts," you probably don't really need the word opinions. Change to "the vision technology will give robots higher reliability, decreasing cost, and increasing ease of use. Try to not use words like "isn't and it's " because they too are considered too informal for this type of writing. You might want to change the word "character" to "figures," it just makes it sound more fluid. You could change "secondly" to "second." Make it: "Therefore these robots become good at adapting their application to different environments." "There are some differences" (not difference).



This is a very good essay overall.



I hope this helps, and good luck!

Answer 4

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